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preview of a story that im working on

Mon May 25, 2009, 7:03 PM
it was a cloudy morning, a boy dressed in a black high school uniform walked down the street. His kinda long black hair flowed with the passing wind, his pale blue eyes seemed to be glazed over as though he was deep in thought. He snapped out of his daze when he almost ran into a street sign, he stopped just before it.

"man, i need to be more attentive when im walking..." he sighed.

he took a look around and noticed that there was no one around. no cars on the roads, no people walking around, and there wasnt even any birds singing as they usually do.

"its unusually quiet today, kinda creepy..." he thought while rubbing his head nervously.

he quickly crossed the street, when he notice a strange figure in the distance. as he got close he noticed that it was a women, she noticed him and before he could get a good look at what she looked like she began to run away from him. he was chasing her through an alley of old crumbling buildings. she stopped to catch her breath while he was a good distance behind her when he notice there was falling rubble. he lunged to push her out of the way...

(end of preview ^^.. please leave a comment to let me know what you think)

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